My ultimate adventure was Christmas. The snow was glistening, the snow was pure white, the snow was soft but cold. When we walked out of the hallway we saw beautiful snowflakes falling. The Christmas tree shined in front of the snow, the star at the top of the shimmered. We opened our presents as we listened to Christmas carols. We rugged up in blankets and went outside to play in the snow. We made snow angels and had a snowball fight. We made a snowman and named it snowy. It was fun, it was happy. It was the best Christmas.
Great work, Izzy. You used ‘snow’ a lot, perhaps you could describe it in detail. How does it feel and look. Maybe you could use some similes to describe the snow. Great sentences.